> As a student, I couldn't stand my required english courses.
  > Textlaundry has helped me to improve my writing immensely
  > and now I'm getting fantastic grades. The best part was that
  > it was so cheap!  -- Lisa Paul

This quote led me to think that students who use this service are anti-intellectual lazy cheaters with tight fists. Ironically, the quote has at least one basic editing problem ("English")! This quote doesn't capture what professional editing is about. Surely there is a more positive way to express the value proposition.