I then spend a day or two, revisiting it, and making tweaks.
I suspect that my biggest issue is overuse of the passive voice. I was pretty much trained into it (long story), and it tends to be my default.
I then spend a day or two, revisiting it, and making tweaks.
I suspect that my biggest issue is overuse of the passive voice. I was pretty much trained into it (long story), and it tends to be my default.